十一期间(National Holiday),你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待,并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学,主要包括如下内容:
1.感谢同学的热情邀请;
2.对他及家人的热情款待表示感激;
3.表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象;
4.再次感谢他们一家人,并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式,而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出,内容并不复杂,可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Dear XiaoLu: How was your recently? It's my great pressure to met you.I'm very appreciate for your enthusiasm inviting. I feel very happy to visit your hometown during National Holiday, Your parents like my family to treat me ,Thank you for your family so much . In those days,We went known place with long historical in your hometown,The beautiful images gave me a deep impression that I exactly want to get there again.If i have a chance,I must do it. I'm very grateful your family again.I hope you could go to my home playing with me if you have time. Bye,darling. Yours, Amy