2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；部分长句用的不错，但从句比例偏少；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇量还要多多积累。

From this picture, we can see that people are crossing the street looking at thier cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. I think it very dangerous. With the devolpment of technolegy it have a big changes in our life. More and more people using the moble phone and they are becomes a smart kong. The phone is a part of thier life. Althoug the phone changes our life become more conviunce it also has many problems . such like the story said that in the famliy party all family members are palys thier phone and ignored their grandparent. This old man feld very angried and put the table down . He said that I just want you guys have a dinner with me , why you are only paly you phone and never talk whit others. In a word, we should put off our phones and talk with others face to face to take care of the peoples who stay with ouself.