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The Influence of Financial Disparity to Friendship Nowadays, an increasing number of people take great pains to make money so as to build up a solid friendship,because they think financial disparity will make a tremendous influence on friendship. Nevertheless,some people disapprove of the idea that financial disparity will influence friendship in that true friendship shouldn't be measured by money. From my perspective,friendship has nothing to do with financial disparity for money is not everything,true friendship is to love each other and give him a helping hand when he is in trouble. To start with, it's generally acknowledged that money is not everything, that is , true friendship can't be bought by money. In other words, if you make use of money to find a friend, he will not be your true friend. It is likely that he will leave you alone if you go bankrupt someday.Let's set up another example,those people with cancer, no matter hoa much money he cost, will never retrive their health.
