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as the saying puts it, "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it". Therefore, we should live a life meaningfully. In today's industrial society, timing is indispensable to everyone who lives in the earth, we have the same time for 24 hours in a day, but we have different method to use our time fully. some people spends time on enriching themselves, others on decaying their life. all of us should make some efforts to change the flaw point for our country or family, letting them get rid of the dilemma they get in. as far as i concerned, a flouring life depends on yourself. by no mean can we overlook the significance of self-value. while all of people do the same thing in the world, we should be the only person who do the great work without regrets
