题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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In our today's sociaty,trust is very important in daily life.Sometimes we regard trust is the most necessary during very satuations.But acctrully trust exit in there no matter where you are. If we wanna be a success ,trust can't be abolish.Parents give us experiences and knowledge of live, we must trust them because of trusting.Friends are also an important part of our life.Trust good friends, we proberbily more easier to be successful. Parterler are worth trusting.We should try our best to finish jobs when we in a team,as well as trust. As matter as fact,trust is absord in everything, it can help us get much, so why not give your trusting and pick others trusting.