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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12886
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加几条从句;文章丰富的词汇表达请发扬,同时能较准确地使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,the style of people's communication has changed than passtime's. especially, it is general that people say hello to each other on internet. Although the internet communication is advanced, popular and fashion, I extremely disagree that electronic communication will replaced face to face contact. Just as the means of the picture description, a couple perfect to talk with thier son face to face. according to a survey, peoper can transfer feelings, smelling, moving and so on when they communicate face to face. However, it is only a cold letters when you contact from electronic pattern. so face to face communication more suit mankind's characters.

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