2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文中有几处拼写错误，应增加高级词汇的使用；全文结构较为严谨。

I have seen a little girl who is really smart, and she's mind is so clear. Abselutely, all of her neighborhods is the same thought of the girl. One day, this girl had meeting a losing dog, so she put the dog in her hand and brought it back. As the day missing, the dog became more and more beautiful, finaliy, someone found the dog belong a richman, who is paid a lot money to found his daughter's dog. One of the neighbors go to talk with the richman, and he is bring many wrong idea to the richman, to make the man be anger with the little girl. With the neighbor foot, they found the home of the smart girl. But the man found his dog is so clean that he know the neighbor is a bad guy. So he didn't paid any money to the guy. And he is so shy for his mistake. In my mind, we should not to believe what we listening or watching, we need to make make conclusion when we understand what it is happens.