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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文章词汇表达丰富,不过请增加高级词汇的使用。

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I have seen a little girl who is really smart, and she's mind is so clear. Abselutely, all of her neighbors is the same thought of the girl. One day, this girl had meets a losing dog, so she put the dog in her hand and brought it back. As the day missing, the dog became more and more beautiful, finaly, someone found the dog is belong a richer, who is paid a lot of money to found his daughter's dog. One of the neighbors is to talk with the richman, and he is take some evil ideas to the richer, to make the man be anger with the little girl. With the neighbor guides, they found the home of the smart girl. But the man found his dog is so clean that he knows the neighbor is a bad guy. Therefore he didn't paid any money to the guy. And he is so shy for his mistake. In my mind, we shouldn't to believe what we listening or watching, we need to make make conclusion when we understand what is happens.

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