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I have seen a little girl who is really smart, and she's mind is so clear. All of her neighbors are the same thought of the girl. One day, this girl has meet a losing dog, so she put the dog in her hand and brought it back. As the day missing, the dog became more and more beautiful, finaily, someone found the dog is belong a richer, who is paid a lot of money to found his daughter's dog. One of the neighbors is to talk with the richman, and he is take some evil ideas to the richer, to make the man be anger with the little girl. With the neighbor guides, they found the home of the smart girl. But the man found his dog is so clean that he knows the neighbor is a bad guy. Therefore he didn't paid any money to the guy. And he is so shy for his mistake. In my mind, we shouldn't to believe what we listening or watching, we need to make make conclusion when we understand what is happens.
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