小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。

i have a good friend. Her name is Yolada. We had known about 18 years. We worked in the same company at that time. She is taller than me as well as her weight. She is responsible for sales. She has married. She has a beautiful daughter and a nice husband. She likes travel every year on the board.