小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；错误句子较少，可适当增加一些复杂句的使用；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

Yan is my best friend,she is 23 years old.She is my junior high school classmate.She can draw and write.I used to learn painting from her,She paints very well,I am so proud of her.She did not go to school after graduation.Later,she went to write a novel,she also recommended to me.I believe she will be a good writer.