小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

Yan is my best friend,she is 23 years old. She is my junior high school classmate. She can draw and write. I used to learn painting from her,she paints extremely well,I am so proud of her. She did not go to school after graduation. Later,she went to write a novel,she also recommended to me. I believe she will be a good writer.