语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用。
There has a "single market" that is establish by who is eager to make their childrens to marry is appear in beijing otherwise other big city of China. Even the marry is by the marry condition of parent is quiet miss after 19 century 80s, but parent is one of the most important situations of younger to marry.
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