虽然文中能够较丰富地使用高级词汇,文章用词太过单一;从句使用量不足;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Recently, the phenomenon of Beijing TianTan Park free paper is pack by some traveler traped by online people attention. How about the Park Management to looking for? Why this situation that take more paper is more seeing on the old people? When the kind of city public facility more and more, how to improve the citizen cultural mind?
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