虽然文中能够较丰富地使用高级词汇,文章用词太过单一;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Recently, the phenomenon of Beijing TianTan Park free paper is pack by traveler is attract online person attention. How about the Park Management to looking for? Why this situation that take more paper is more seeing on the olderly? When the kind of city public facility more and more, how to improve the cultural mind of citizens?
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