2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

虽然文中能够较丰富地使用高级词汇，文章用词太过单一；从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

Recently, the phenomenon of Beijing TianTan Park free paper is pack by traveler attracts online person attention. How about the Park Management to looking for? Why this situation that takes more paper more seeing on the olderly? When the kind of city public facility more and more, how to improve the cultural thought of citizens?