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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8999
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;作者词汇表达较灵活,但请但仔细检查词汇的拼写;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

As we all know that never judge the person by thier appearance. We always have a good impressive with person who have a good apprearance. But it is unfear and redicuiouls that we make this dececions. We should pay attention the peopols mind and thier ablity rather than thier appearance. Not noly in the old and now ,we all can see that so many good appearance people have a bad things. They do sommething more easy because they are beautiful. Now ,we should get off this bad habits and built a better. We should give the same chance for everyone. It necessary that make a changes now.

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