小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

During the winter holiday，I did a cashier in a small convenience store。 And it was also the third time I did part-time job in the same place。 I went to HK with my roommate in the end of February，we took the cable car together to the Victoria Peak，we can overlook the HK Victoria harbor’s night scene。 The aim of we went to HK is shopping，but we spent a lot of time in Victoria Peak that we can not have enough time to buy something what we need。