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Dear Editor, I’m a senior high student. Now many students use mobile phones.Some students think it is a kind of fashion to use mobile phones, and some other students think it's convenient for them to contact with their family by virtue of phones.Nowadays, an increasing number of students bring mobile phones into classroom, as a result, classroom disciplines are destoryed because of phone bells. What's worse, some students are wasting the precious class time to send messages. Therefore, I strongly suggest that mobile phones be forbidden to use in classroom, because classroom is the place where we use to learn knowledge. What we students should do is to focus on learning instead of chasing so-called fashion.So I sincerely hope that school will set up specific regulations to prohibit students from using mobile phones in classroom. I will be grateful if you take my suggestion into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely Li Hua