2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者应增加从句的使用；高级词汇偏少，且文中有部分拼写错误。

We all know about the good place Zhangjaijie, which place have good sence in the word.It's my home town,my love place. I love my home town so much,so ,I think there are so many interesting place in there.such as Tianzisha andTianmenshan,the mountains will make you fell amazing.But the most interesting place is GlassBrige.This place is a new sence place for traver,when i went to the place at the first time,i felt the brige was so high,i'm afraid about it,but my moom couraged me walk the reast way.I want you go there with me ,beacause i'm not afraid it now. The last,Welcome to my home town!