托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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I firmly believe that people living in a rural area is much better than living in cities. With the severe polluted air in the cities, citizens always get sick and become more and more weak. Unless the air pollution, water pollution are one of the serious problems. Thinking about the water which we are necessary every day is get polluted, maybe we will be infected with virus. Not only the living surroundings are important, but also mental situations are fatal. There is a research said that if people get close with nature, they will feel less pressure. With my own experience, when I get stressed out by studying, I would like to go hiking on a mountain. After that, I would feel more relax and be able to concerned on my study. Living in a rural area could relaxed themselves through walking on the country road and appreciating the beauty of our nature mother. These are the reasons why I think living in a rural area is much better.