托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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I firmly believe that people living in a rural area is much better than living in cities. With the severely polluted air in the cities, citizens always get sick and become more and more weak. Unless the air pollution, water pollution is one of the serious problems. Thinking about the water which we are necessary every day is getting polluted, maybe we will be infected with virus. Not only the living surroundings are essential but also mental situations are fatal. There is a research provided that if people get close with nature, they will feel less pressured. With my own experience, when I get stressed out by studying, I would like to go hiking on a mountain. After that, I would feel more relax and be able to concentrate on my study. Living in a rural area could relax themselves through walking on the country road and appreciating the beauty of our nature mother. These are the reasons why I think living in a rural area is much better.