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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

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要求：: Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

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I am a outgiong girl so there are many idears in my head. I have a lot of habbis and it always change different in short time. In my opinion ,the person should have something they real want do and insist long time. Recently I think learning English is meaningful in my life. I like it and interested in learn it well. I hope oneday I can became a English teacher and teach the child how to learn English well.

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