结构较为严谨,文中衔接成分很少;文中从句使用不丰富;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累。
a beatiful city in china china is a beatiful country,it is mountainous and lovely .i lived in a small town in chengzhou.chengzhou is called the garden of hunan province . there are lots of trees on the side of road,it has a large number of flowers under the big tree. welcome to our city.