2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

作者词汇基本功很好，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；可适当增加几条从句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Todays, the mobile phone take a important part in the people's life. More and more people use the mobile phone to communicate each other.Even some pupils have one. One hand, the mobile phone make people's contacting easier. On the other hand, it brings some troubles. As the picture above, "people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see", it shows that some one put so more attention to thier cell phone that they fail to see others. The news, reported on newspapers or TV, showed some one has been hit by the car when he crossed the road seeing the cellphone. The students lose their class for play the mobil phone too much which also make their eyesight worse. The cell phone easy be attacked by virus.If your phone in this situation, you will have some troubles to deal hardly. you have a risk of losting of your money,QQ accout, Wechat accout and e-mail,etc. As the above, i perfect to talk with my friends face to face though the mobile phone covered our global.