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语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒。
With the rapid development of the society, there begin to appear a new approach for purchasing which was named"online shopping",a kind of the e-commers. It was soon favoured by billions of customers and became a fashion. There is no doubt that online shopping possesses many advantages. For instance, online shopping cut out many unnecessary steps in tradition trading ways so that the cost will be declined and the same goods will be cheaper than those in stores. Also, all the orders will be delivered by the expressions ,which helps customers avoid the hard process of carrying goods home. However, there exists many problems in online shopping as well,such as some online stores are not securied that will have the personal information stolen . In my opinion, it would be better if we become more aware of the importance of security and pay more attention when shopping. I also suggest that the government should approve proper laws in the field of online shopping,which can have an impact on protecting the rights of customers.
