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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误；作者词汇量不足，拼写错误较多。
Nowadays, the internet play a importent roles of our lifes. People more and more like use the electronic communication each other. So some people think the electronic communication can replace face to face contract. But l have the diffrent thinking. At past, we need write letter when we want to contract each other when we do not at one place. And now the internet repearing and we can use the internet contract with our friends and familys despirite the place is how long. It let our contract ismore and more better. However, the electronic communication can not replace face to face contract. Because we need face to face contract and it make our contract better, we need emotions when we chat each other.So i think the electronic communication can not replace the face to face contract.
