2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；加强局势的变化，会取得更好的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

There is someone says that believe in yourself is the most important thing,because it is the way to success.I always take it as belief. As we known,there are various of way to success, some people may says you should have energy and someone help you when you have troubles. other people may says that time of suit yourself. But I just want to say if you don't believe in yourself then you couldn't make a big progress,also you couldn't become a success man of woman. I remembered that when I was six years old, I don't trust myself .and I felt so bad,so I can't do anything perfect. One day, a man told me I can do somethings that others do,he said that just believe in yourself whenever people say anything. then I trusted the man said and did what he told me did,results was that I success .After that I tell myself must believer self.So I think the way to success is believe in yourself.