2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the technology and economic develop，most people buy something online is become more and more popular.they think it convenient and cheaper than outside real shop.what's more ,online shopping will follow the fashion and have so much creative material. In my opinion,I don't like to online shopping.The following is my point of view and my experience .I used to buy a skirt online.but what i receive is the skirt broke a hole.It isn't the skirt I have seen online,which made me angry.The most made me angry That is the seller unwilling to exchange a good for me.so i give the seller a bad comment.but the seller call me endless in order to asked me to rewrite the comment. I think i will buy something in the real shop .It will chose the suitable and excellent thing although expensive than online.