2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文章高级词汇使用贫乏，单词拼写做的不错；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用。

Nowadays,mobile phone becomes more more popular among people.Especially,for young people,mobile phones are becoming a very important part of their life. why does mobile phone become so important? Here are some reasons.First,mobile phone is very convenient for people. People can not only make calls with phones but also do shoppings, watch TV,and chat with friends.Second,when people go out, they don't need to take much money with them any longer,because we can pay with weixin, which is called Internet money.As we all know,mobile phones are very useful in our life.But lots of people are overusing mobile phones, which will do harm to themselves.First,our eyes will get near-sighted after a long time watching on the phones.Second,sometimes it can be very dangerous,just like the people in the picture,the man is crossing the street looking at his cell phone and using walking stick in order to see.If there comes a car, he is likely to lose his life.