2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Now，many parent do anything for their childern. w e knows that it's not good for the kids. in order to the kids healthly growth and let's them independent for their lives. As a parent should think of those situation. So let's do it. we can let them go to school alone. And they are wash bowl when eaten the dinner