2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；作者词汇量提升空间很大，高级词汇使用要加强，单词拼写要认真。

On Excessive Packaging The goods need package when it wll be selled.But there are many goods use the package too many.Now, I will talk about the excessive packaging. Firstly, the seller want to better sell their goods, and the goods need package.Secondly, person want to buy butiful goods, if we see two goods that they are very likely but one package is looked very butiful and another is looked common, we will select the utiful one. So the excessive packaging appear. I think the goods need package, but the package need not very excessive. The excessive packaging will be continue doing, and we should resist the phenomenon.