错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章上下文衔接自然;文中词汇表达较为丰富,但高级词汇比较少,单词拼写要也加强。
The new year is coming ,I'm so glad that one of my foreign friends will come to visit me .If I can ,I will take him playing all around my hometown .But actually,time is always limited. And the most interesting place is the standar of me town ,Guanyin Tample. There are many people kneel down in front of the Buddha religously .