作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。
it's not wise to draw a conclusion once we seeing or hearing something As we all know, we'll make a lot of mistakes if we always draw a hasty conclusion. so we arrive to a conclude that it's not wise to draw a conclusion once we seeing or hearing something. the reasons can be list as follows. Firstly, not long ago, the proverb that the things we seeing are truth and what we hearing may be false, somehow, Things may go on by contrary. So we should change our thought even sometimes invert it. scondly, with the development of human beings level of life, humen become wiser and wiser so that they learnd to cheat others out of dispite. So we must learn to be calm and considerate when faced with things out of contral. From my perspective, we'd better think twice before leap or make it deteriorates.
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