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protecting envirainment is too improtant,just like the water to a fish.with the rpie develop,more and more peopie aware important that protect,My hometown My hometown is situated in the middle of our city.In the past,it has beautiful scenery that be surrounded of green trees and the fishs were having fun in the lake,what's more,the house was simple and brude,person's woke-life were poor.But now,it has made great changes in my hometown.The high buildings are standing there densely and the big and large cars always appear in the street