2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；文中词汇表达丰富度要加强，同时要注意单词拼写。

Nowadays,there have many parents to do everthing for their children.but it is not good for your children, they may do nothing when you are not around. So what you can do? firstly ,you should let your baby do some easy things,for example ,buy some foods,cloths and let your children to pay their tuition. scondly,you must take care of your childrens life,and give their some advise,lastly, to encourage you baby . In my opinion,once a use , forever a custom.let your children to be indepence and your baby will have a good furture.