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we are always easy to get the conclusion without taking account of every details .expecially practice.most times,only when we explore the truth by ourselves ,can we deprive confuse. It is essential for people to learn a skill that can identical ture or not though constantiy practice.ears and eyes never make ture everything because their limitation.a person want to attain goals ,practice is good choise,it merely cultivate technology,promote motivation and improve belief.
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