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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10391
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分49.5分
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从句使用很不错,再接再厉;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;作者词汇量偏小,另外文章有些单词拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

As a old saying that"it's unwise to put all eggs in one basket".It means that we should think the worst condition and prepare it when you begin to deal with difficult things. As far as I'm corcened,I think that it is wise to put your eggs in some baskets.When something bad happened,one of your basket was broken,you just lost some eggs,so you have other eggs in your other baskets. If you put your all eggs in your only basket,you maybe lost your all eggs when your basket was broken.As a result,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.

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