2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowadays,there are many parents to do everthing for their children.but it is not good for your children, they may do nothing when you are not around. So what you can do? firstly ,you should let your baby do some easy things,for example ,buy some foods,cloths and let your children to pay their tuition. secondly,you must take care of your childrens life,and give their some advise,lastly, to encourage you baby . In my opinion,once a use , forever a custom.let your children to be indepence and your baby will have a good furture.