文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;作者句法基础较为扎实;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
As an old saying that"it's unwise to put all eggs in one basket".It means that we should think the worst condition and prepare it when you begin to deal with difficult things. As far as I'm concerned, I think that it is wise to put your eggs in some baskets. When something bad happened, one of your baskets was broken, you just lost some eggs, so you have other eggs in other baskets. If you put all eggs in only basket, you maybe lost all of your eggs when your basket was broken. As a result, it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.