采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;熟练使用了一些长难句;文中词汇表达不够丰富,且有较多拼写错误。
As we know,many persons think that our eyes see is true and the listenling is wrong,we will make an conclusion at onece,but everything is not 100% true. In the university,many things is not come true that we think or see,for example,the sun light we see now,it was send from the sun six minites ago,because the ruting betwwen earth and sun is too long. The other case is that many sea up sky will accor some building or beatiful thing,but is not belong to there,it accor there is because the finamynen in the earth. The two case will let us know that our eyes see is true and the listenling is wrong,we will make an conclusion at onece this setence is wrong.
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