采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;从句和复杂句用的不错,但部分句子还有一些小问题;文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺,单词拼写也要更仔细。
As we know,many persons think that our eyes see is true and the listening is wrong,we will make a conclusion at onece,but everything is not 100% true. In the university,many things are not come true that we think or see,for example,the sun light we see now,it was send from the sun six minutes ago,because the ruting betwwen earth and sun is too long. The other case is that many sea up sky will accor some building or beatiful thing,but is not belong to there,it accor there is because the finamynen in the earth. The two case will let us know that our eyes see is true and the listening is wrong,we will make a conclusion at onece this setence is wrong.
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