2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping In recent years,Online Shopping is become more and more fashion in this mo-den century.Not only workers like it,but also stuents,old people all be appealed in it.It's a hot in 90s century. Online Shopping have some advantages.First,it can bring convenient to people,people can not to buy googs in a long way.Second,goods on net are cheaper than shop.Also have some beautiful,lovely,pretty goods.Last but not least,It's a fashion tend.people all like fashion's goods,espeacially young woman and students.So,many manufactures are want to appeal customer's eyes,they created some Online Shop like TaoBao,JingDong...But Online Shopping also have some disadvantages.,like some unsafety's goods,unsafety's transport,unsafety's seller... In my opnion,i think we can buy goods from Online,becaue it's really convenient and useful.If you can not buy your fantastic goods in shop,you can buy it on net.If you don't want to walk a long,you should but it on net.Goods on online are very variety.you must can choose your love!