2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；作者词汇基础不错，高级词汇使用比较灵活；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

We gradually find out the fact that the communication between people and companise has changed tight with the increasingly development of scientific technology.Under the circumstnce,only learning how to manipulate company,can a person make progress.A person is more likely to gain triumph who has a large amount of knowledge about message skills.We can save very complex problem with company,which have stronger message tackling system.In the contrary,we will lie in the dilemma if we never fail to figure out how to use company.Every thing have two sides，what we struggle to distinguish can help us avoid some unnecessary troubles.Therefore,We not only try our best to learning message technology，but overcome addiction to company.All in all，we will have beautiful perspective if we accomplish above all.