题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇基础扎实;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
We have gradually found that with the development of science and technology, the exchange between people has changed. In this case, only learn how to manipulate the computer, a person can make progress. A person who has a lot of news skills is more likely to win. We can solve very complex problems with the computer in having a more powerful messaging system. On the contrary, if we never figured out how to use the computer, we will be in trouble. The computer would like to double-edged sword, we try to distinguish between good and bad can help us to avoid some unnecessary trouble. Therefore, we not only try to understand the message technology, but also to overcome the addiction of the computer. All in all, if we complete all of the above, we will have a beautiful perspective.