2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(109):英语学习

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中高级词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

Dear Jane, I’m very glad to hear from you. Thanks for your care and concern about my present learning situation. I have got along well with my students as well as teachers, and all of them are willing to help me when I am in trouble. Besides, I've gradually accumstomed myself to the high school life. I am keen on English learning and I am also hard-working. Although some learning obstacles appear sometimes, I am full of confidence. I used to believe that failure is the key to sucess. Thus, I will never give up chasing my dreams. Please write to me soon and tell me all about yourself. Yours, Xiao Hua