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Dear Jane, I’m very glad to hear from you. Thanks for your care and concern about my present learning situation. I would like to tell you that everything goes well here. I have got along well with my students as well as teachers, and all of them are willing to help me when I am in trouble. Besides, I've gradually accustomed myself to the high school life. At present, I am keen on English learning and I am also hard-working. I always make great efforts to pass all kinds of Enligh tests. Although some learning obstacles appear sometimes, I am full of confidence. I used to believe that failure is the key to sucess. Thus, I will never give up chasing my dreams. Please write to me soon and tell me all about yourself. Yours, Xiao Hua
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