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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(109):英语学习

发布时间:2015-08-28 16:07浏览次数:1324
要求:
假如你是小华,你的美国朋友Jane又给你来信了,经过了一个学期,她非常关心你目前的学习状况,特别是英语学习。请你用英语给Jane写一封80-100字的回信,要包含以下要点:
1. 与老师和同学相处很愉快。
2. 逐渐适应了高中阶段的学习生活。
3. 热爱英语学习,也很努力。
4. 在学习英语方面仍有一些困难,但充满信心。

注意:信件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入字数。


Dear Jane,
 I’m very glad to hear from you. _________ 
Please write to me soon and tell me all about yourself.
Yours,
  Xiao Hua
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文中用词灵活多样,但要注意增加使用高级词汇;从句使用不熟练;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Dear Jane, I’m very glad to hear from you. Thanks for your care and concern about my present learning situation. I would like to tell you that everything goes well here. I have got along well with my students as well as teachers, and all of them are willing to help me when I am in trouble. Besides, I've gradually accustomed myself to the high school life. At present, I am keen on English learning and I am also hard-working. I always make great efforts to pass all kinds of Enligh tests. Although some learning obstacles appear sometimes, I am full of confidence. I used to believe that failure is the key to sucess. Thus, I will never give up chasing my dreams. Please write to me soon and tell me all about yourself. Yours, Xiao Hua

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