请使用灵活多样的词汇表达;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
may i shoots video with you? no wechat ,no internet ,just for me. I want to find a teacher who is a native english speaker ,because we can't speak english as fast as a native english speaker. no goals, i just hope the child like english,and feel interesting in english