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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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we have a statistic about the relationship between education and earnings. from the chart , we can obiviously sum up the result people having more education degree have more earnings at the same time , they have less umeployment rate. the data comes from the people age 25 and over. they all full-time workers. we divide all these people into 8 types by education degree . the highest degree is doctoral degree and the lowest degree is less than high school diploma. so we can conclude it is important to study hard in school , because almost people want to have a life affordable buying many things. we need money to support our material demand . if you want to earn money , you should able to do the complex and difficult job . normally higher difficult job need lots of professional knowledge. come on ,from now on , we pick up the books , and pay more attention to the content of the books. for the promising future, try your best to study

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