Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者词汇量积累不错,能较灵活地使用高级词汇;部分长句用的不错,但从句比例偏少;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
we have a statistic about the relationship between education and earnings. from the chart , we can obiviously sum up the result people having more education degree have more earnings at the same time , they have less umeployment rate. the data comes from the people age 25 and over. they all full-time workers. we divide all these people into 8 types by education degree . the highest degree is doctoral degree and the lowest degree is less than high school diploma. so we can conclude it is important to study hard in school , because almost people want to have a life affordable buying many things. we need money to support our material demand . if you want to earn money , you should able to do the complex and difficult job . normally higher difficult job need lots of professional knowledge. come on ,from now on , we pick up the books , and pay more attention to the content of the books. for the promising future, try your best to study