小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

可适当增加从句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

I have a friend whose name is Tiffany. She's about 12 years old. She have a long hair and a big eyes.Her favourite colour is red because she believe red can give her lucky,but i don't think so.I consider she is really suitable for wihte. She always reasonable. I love my friend and so i give her a hug.